the final sketchbook design tweaked after pitch

this is my final sketchbook design - ive tweaked the male figure so the gun is  apart of the knight added in where the blurb would go in a vague approximation of the ocr std font i plan on using. i have also neatened up the big sleep font, added a red blood drop to the queen and used the correct dimensions on the spine in order to establish how much i can fit on there. the only thing that i plan on changing when i begin using illustrator is the female form whose other arm needs to be more visible in order to fully convey the concept of the figure. now that ive tweaked the design and have how it will look on paper i'm very excited about translating it into illustrator which should be fairly simple since my design revolves around fill shapes and silhouettes.