The Crit

I got really good feedback for my Ibook, they liked how explorational  it seemed and seemed to be happy with the crowded full and fun theme. They liked all the small details that i included but felt that i should definitely leave it so that i didn't risk the book with overcrowding. visually it was strong and they had no criticism since each section had a clear theme throughout that made sure each section/heading was clear. My website also received graphical approval and they felt that it all scaled well when at mobile size, they did however feel that my text line spacing should be larger since it was too condensed at any size making it harder to read, i completely agree and have set out to change this so my line spacing is now at 1.6em's and my subheadings (What is migration and Fun Facts) are now slightly larger in size and bold so they stand out more. With these changes im now much happier with my website and im certainly sold on my visual style.