The poster above is the poster that i presented for the crit, i got a lot of positive comments and the aspect seemed clear, two changes were suggested; to make the slogan edge parallel to the block rectangle on the shield and to alter the "f" in the "rifts" so that it was clearer and more readable. i agreed with both points so i definitely want to try and change them on the final poster. altering the f will be easy but i may have some issues trying to make the edge of rifts because i have not been very careful in creating and labelling new layers. thankfully i don't think that this is too much of an issue so if i cant figure out how to change it i'm not worried. i noticed myself that i had a few lines along the very edge of the poster ( when i had to make it a live paint i had to box the edges in order to fill the outer bits) so i also need to drag these visible lines of to the edge of the art board. despite these small changes im really happy with it - i did ask my peers if anything needed to be done on the buildings but they didn't feel anything needed to be added and i agree i've successfully balanced texture with fill colours so i think anything more would be too overpowering.
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